Academy day 7

Isaac-shared what he want to do in life about modeling music and uberprint and leading on other to think about there future.

Araceli-

academy day 7

Alicia-brought everyone together and get to know them

Master Academy Final Question

Kaylee                                     Montgomery
Dr.preston
English lit
30 may 2017

    During this course we have been treated like colleagues. Sense the first day we entered this class we all made a big decision and that decision was weather or not we wanted open source learning or basic book work and normal classroom. We all made the big decision to do open source learning.Now this is alot of trust you have in us and I think for the most part we deserved now there is those blog with nothing but it there option  you tried, but for the other that did take the advantage of it deserved it.

  During this course we read alot of fiction  together. We read earth on turtle back which bring me back to when no body had faith in muskrat because he was so tiny but we learn from this book because no matter how small you are everything possible. Another book we read to get her was feirenheit 451 which was about the author pretty much predicting the future and how you were not aloud to read book or would not be able have them you would have to burn them and if you were caught they would burn your house down. Another we read was the pedestrian which was a man walking on the street alone the cops pulled him over took him in and questioned him and it was more awkward because his house was the only house with lights on.

During this course I did reconnect to earth on turtle back because I did my big question on how earth was created and I use the book as an idea. My big question led me to do alot of researcg and made me know way mote then what i started off with. Last week I presented on how earth was created and showed a video.

While taking this course has been more then an experience for me and a great learning experience. I enter this class not know what to expect and now I am glad I took this course because I learned how to start my resume and how to  a blog and how to write an essay and much more. In this course something that made me laugh out loud was when you grabbed the book and hit on the desk to get everyone attention everyone faces were priceless.

Starting this course we were told we were going to teach the class but we all took it as a home and now look at us everyone has been presenting where as if we would of done this in the beginning no body would want to show up. These couple of weeks we have heard from many different students and some student that piped out to me we're, sokratis,Roxy,Alicia, Giselle, and Michelle. Alot Allot of them had something in common. Starting off with sokratis he talked about how to create a business and what it take and how you need to set goals. Roxy took me out of surprise and ended up doing my make up in front of the whole class while talking about the history. Alicia got all of us to reunite with the class sense we just stay in are group and stay quiet. Giselle talked to us about why do we judge and how to not judge a book buy it cover. Lastly Michelle talked about bullying as well and how we don't know there life story to judge.Dont get me wrong everyone presented really well and enjoyed each one of them but these one stood out to me.

I wouldn't say i am a hero but I could say i didn't present to bad. During the time I had to step up my presentation I did reach out to mentor and look up information on what other scientist believe. I conquered my challenge and that was to go up in front of the whole class to present but I got to say it wasn't to bad i remember being so shy in the beginning and now it amazing how much more I became less shy and have more confidence in my self. This class helped me with my writing skill and speaking skill and to talk more.

This will sum up my final but I just want to say thank for everything you taught us and what we learned. I learned so much during this course and I did my best and I tried to keep up with my blog as much as I can.

Academy day 7

Sokartis-how to make a great business 

went to school dropped out of collage started working got into higher position got enough money open a business he so successful but act simple wouldn't be able to notice he rich or own a big business start thinking about what you want to do and make your goal and how you will succeed your goal 

Michelle- why do we judge
we tend to judge because we don't know the person if you know the person your most likely not one to judge then if you don't 

academy day 6

jose- Important to speak your mind
cricized for along time and finally speak up do not let anyone cricized you motivate yourself

angelia- is there after life

showed a video of a man who was near death and what he saw 

robert-why there so many different religions
because everyone believe in different beliefs it doesn't matter what you believe in it just love Christianity is the number 1 religion

academy day 5

trevor-why does the week start on Sunday?
The 7th day nothing should be done according to god. A.C time period. Device formed planets.  The week serve no purpose it just organizes months. Jews created the week.Autally Babylon created the week Jews just took credit.Romans named there week after the gods.

Adan- why don'tt people believe in external life?
religion has a way to make people believe there no life on other planets. People go in to denyable that why many believe the no other life then earth.people have fears of the unknown.

Claudia-thinking for your self
making your own decision
ask people for advice to see what they think is best.Dont let anyone opinion change your mind thought.

master academy day 5

blake-drugs
LSD -a way to get high that last a long time could cause flash backs
magic mushrooms
use to connect spiritually
The drive could be scary to other people and are much safer then street drugs y

erik-
napalm a bomb that was first used
alot  of kid effected by it you can see there skin coming off and the pain the kids suffered
mustard gas-blister burn used in ww1

academy day 4

Leo-gave a presentation on nuclear weapons and thought the class different bomb type and there radiation and how much was spent on nuclear weapons.

gizelle-gave a presentation on judgement and why do we judge everyone different and doesnt deserve to be judged don't judge a book by a cover get to know them better. many people commit suside because they believe don't feel like they belong her and social media a big one and many get hurt and feel worthless. if someone getting judged stand up for them everyone the same.

ana- when your doing something you like  if your on your phone time goes by faster as for exsample if your on your phone time goes by faster then if your just sitting there doing nothing time goes by slow

jacky-how do we learn?
teacher should think how us student thinks.

presentation

there were 2 intresting power points today one on technology and how it impact are life and the other on having a positive mind set and push your limitation but have practice up to that point don't just go for it.

blog post

Today I am continuing working on my big question.

Big question presentation

Roxy-make up durning queen Elizabeth time was the more white your makeup was the more elegant you were also to much make up is when it all caked on and doesn't look like make up.Lastly her presentation was great but was so unexpected to be in it

Next step big question

so I finally reached out to someone asking if they can help me understand my topic more so now I wait. I reached out to a mentor from this site http://www.earthmentor-davidnelson.com/contact-1# and now I am hoping for a reply

MGOM

Durning this time in class I been thinking of ideas how I can continue on with my big question and how I can start thinking about how to teach the class.So my project I been working on is looking on how was earth created and i have been  looking online to see what other believe and who to look out to I been looking forward to creating a powerpoint on different beliefs and I am going to look to talk to someone interested in this and know more then I do to talk to.For now I am going to look for more information once I have enough I will present my work through a PowerPoint and go from there. From mine and your conference we discussed me to reach out to someone from cal poly and email them and see if there willing to give me some of there thoughts so if I don't find a mentor I will be doing a lot of researching and find out my self if there is a real answer:

We eat social media for breakfast essay

As reading we eat social media for breakfast I found the way the author used his words and the way he write was very interesting.Starting off he start by talking about him not knowing about the Internet and what really goes on on social media and how he could never imagine himself posting a picture of his breakfast but he did because he wanted to eat his breakfast with someone special. right here he getting us interested in wanting to read on and find that one person and when he use restorical question to have are mind thinking.Now the whole essay it self was amazing the author had so much thing as us now a day don't pay attention now I am the one to read something and if I don't like the concept I stop reading but this actually grabbed my attention he talk at the end how the next day his daughter come and it Sunday pancake day yes you may think well why is that important well it important because he get to cook with his daughter and enjoy the moment just like his daughter said the key to making good food is love.This whole topic was to tell us show us how social media is and how on the blog it doesn't sell your stuff and what you post is yours and if you want your blog you can make it private and not feel like it secure with all these social media app it all free but only because all those secrete or so called secrete messages you sent are all being sold and your so called private profile is getting sold also so this is a really great essay that most teacher wouldn't take the time to write.

Digital Divide

(Definition) Digital divide is a term that refers to the gap between demographics and regions that have access to modern information and communications technology, and those that don't or have restricted access. This technology can include the telephone, television, personal computers and the Internet

Technology can help me because there so much  you can do on it and learn from it the web is huge and you can search up so many different thing and find so much out but technology can set you back to because there a lot of apps and if your interested in those app befor you know it you spent so much time just scrolling through your phone and then think I just wasted my time. Now if I had to look at a different point of view of myself there wouldn't be to much of me because I don't post much so there not much to see. Not everything is private or protected you may feel protected but your really not.

Ignite talk from others

Alicia:why do people judge without knowing you?Looked it up online and talked to friends and related to earth on turtle back when muskrat get bullied.

Cynthia:why don't know what I want to be?

Looked at careers that were well payed 

Sokrits: how to own a business?

Talked to his uncle and built up from the beginning it all luck and type of community Your around and what your selling

Miguel:Why do we work for everything?

Do next work hard to succeed 

Angelina: is there a After life?

Looked up people who believed they been to heaven

Roxy:is Time real or an illusion 

Time is just an illusion 

Ignite talk

Big question: how was earth created?

One thing I did over break to explore my question was search different website on how earth was created. While I was exploring I learned that earth formed around 4.5 billion years ago by accretion from the solar nebula.this question could relate to earth on turtle back when muskrat bring up earth.my next step will be reaching out to someone that know more then I do 

Resources

resources:I am adding some text from the website to show the different thoughts and the same thoughts from different resources on how earth was created.

1."Earth formed around 4.54 billion years ago by accretion from the solar nebula. Volcanic outgassing probably created the primordial atmosphere and then the ocean; but the atmosphere contained almost no oxygen and so would have been toxic to most modern life including humans. Much of the Earth was molten because of frequent collisions with other bodies which led to extreme volcanism. A "giant impact" collision with a planet-sized body is thought to have been responsible for forming the Moon. Over time, the Earth cooled, causing the formation of a solid crust, and allowing liquid water to exist on the surface."http://www.bbc.co.uk/science/earth/earth_timeline/earth_formed

2.The first and most widely accepted theory, core accretion, works well with the formation of the terrestrial planets like Earth but has problems with giant planets. The second, the disk instability method, may account for the creation of these giant planets. www.google.com/amp/amp.space.com/19175-how-was-earth-formed.html

3.It all started with a tremendous bang. Somewhere in our galaxy a star exploded, throwing out masses of gas and dust.
https://www.google.com/amp/s/amp.theguardian.com/science/2008/apr/28/starsgalaxiesandplanets.geology

4.When it comes to how the Earth was formed, forces that can only be described as fiery, chaotic, and indeed godlike, were involved
www.google.com/amp/s/www.universetoday.com/76509/how-was-the-earth-formed/amp/

5.The Earth settled down in a very fortunate orbit for the existence of life. At 93 million miles distance from the Sun it receives just about the right amount of radiant energy.
http://topdocumentaryfilms.com/birth-earth/

Third post of what i did

So a overall of what I did over vacation was work but when I wasn't working I was cleaning or going out with my siblings to the park or down to oceano to visit family and I accomplished allot of thing that needed to be done.This week went by so fast but I was able to do what I wanted to accomplish this spring break.

Second post of what I did

I stayed home and caught up with missing work and assignments that needed done and homework that due when we come back from spring break.

first post of what I did

I went out to the movies and watched the fate of the furious and went out to eat with my siblings.

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Masterpiece Academy Topic

My masterpiece academy topic is how was earth created.

Fahrenheit 451 essay

In Fahrenheit 451 it start off with Montag and him being a firemen that would burn books and smile about it but later on in the book he become a man who love to read and he ended up watching his house getting  lit on fire because in that society you could'nt read books it was against the law and who ever did the firemen would burn them with your house.This all lead to Montag breaking the law on instead of doing his consequences he went on the run from the police and ended up escaping and he still had a book left that he hid in the black house and kept running when he ran in to a group of people that believed everyone make mistakes and letting Montag stay with them.

In this book Ray Bradbury doesn't just talk about Montag there more to it. He also make pretty good prediction that were going to be in the real world that he predicted. Here are some exsamples that we all came up with, we eat garbage, it's not too different from Mildred overdosing, another one is   earbuds he predicted it diffrently but they work the same way as society now that everyone has,We all have phones just like  Mildred watching TV all the time is just like everyone on their phones, it used to be that people read books and talked to each other; now everyone is addicted to electronics and false news stories, like the chase where they set up some innocent bystander -- there have been a lot of false stories, like Santa Maria PD lying about arrests.

Lastly Ray Bradbury tone with Clarisse & Beatty are way different from each other we have Clarisse who love nature and hates tv and is interested in odd thing and asked a lot of of question and very curious and doesn't like violence. Captin Beatty is a firemen that love his job and is very smart and know about books more then anyone and would talk to Montag about them. He can qoute any book from memory but what ironic is he wanted to die and died in part 3. 

My thoughts on Fahrenheit 451

1. I found it very interesting and i like how you compared it to different thing and referred back to the past book we read.

GUIDING QUESTIONS pp. 133-147

1. What is the significance of the glass of milk, the apple, and the pear?
This symbolizes Montag having a break.
2. Montag thought he saw the Mechanical Hound and reached his breaking point. What did he see?
He saw a deer.
3. After Montag's musing about the Sun and fire, why is it ironic that he sees a fire?  How is this fire different?
The fire was warm and he stood listening to the flame and The firefighters helped put out the fire.
4. Who is Granger? Who are his associates? (Spend a few sentences explaining this.)Granger is a man who letting Montag feel welcomed his associates are leaders for a small group.
5. What happens on the "show" portraying the chase after Montag?
The helicopters lose Montag and can't hold the audience long to stay and watch.They caught another innocence man and acted as if it was Montag. 
6. What does Granger mean when he says, "We made the right kind of mistakes."

A step ahead of a hound

1. What did Montag do at the Blacks' house?
Montag hid his books in the kitchen and left.
2. How does Faber describe the war?
Faber tell them they should head to the river.
3. Describe Faber's TV.
It was the size of a postal card 

4. What was on TV while Montag was on the run?
It was Montag name saying still on the run from the police.
5. What was Montag running for when everyone looked out of their houses?

From the helicopter and mechanical hounds that were right down his road.

Run Montag Runs

I think at the end of the story Montag gets  and does because in most story like this someone always does at the end and I think it going to be Montag

The Chase Is On

1. Why did the Hound attack Montag?
The hound attack Montag because he is wanted for murder and the hounds are to attack the ones with crime.
2. How did Montag defend himself?
Montag defended himself  with a bloom of fire but soon the dog took the flame gun out of his hand when he attacked.

3. What did Montag realize about Beatty?
Montag realized that Beatty wanted to die .

4. Where did montag go?
Montag went to Fabers


5. What happened when Montag crossed the street? 
When montag went to cross the street he got halfway and heard a roar from the beetle engine whined higher as it out on speed.

Montag kills

Montag kills Beatty because she less the firefighters to montag house and has montag watch everything happened so he throws flames thrower at her.

Fahrenheit 451 question #2

1.Montag is looking for a better understanding of the books while Mildred worried about someone finding out and burning the house down and burn the books.
2.Society believes that the war is nothing to worry about tand hat it will be over with soon.
3.professor Faber was someone that also read books and montag meet him at the park and finally texted him once he started reading books as well.
4.He become frustrated and start saying shut up because he was trying to read a book to memorize it but the commercial kept going.
5.Faber argues that the books have good qualities and you can find life in the books.number 2 the book has leisure to digest it and number 3 the right to carry out actions based on what we learned from the interaction of the first two.
6.The green small object aloud montag and Faber to talk in eat so montag months and get information.
7.The clowns intertwine and amuse the audience just like in society.
8.Mrs.phelps start crying when Montag read the poem because she said it was awful but it only because that the way society wants her to think.
9.Montag end at looking at his house that going to be set on fire because his books need burned

Fahrenheit 451 questions

1.Ray Bradbury start the novel ask by burning his book rather then reading them because he believed that it was against the law.
2.The books are compared to birds because when the books are burning the pages fly off and are flapping
3.Montag settle into a life where he not happy and for clarisse she make him questioned his life and if he happy.
4.The technology is so similar because you would keep the seashells in your ears but this doesn't help montag months and his wife because her mind is still empty and they use the seashells to ignore each other

5.The narrator introduces us to montag this early in in his life because he want us to see his change because his life was easy but the clarisse made him question himself
6. The narrator introduces clarisse befor Mildred because clarisse help in a way that Mildred can't .
7.Sense it was tge future all the houses were fireproof except the books sense they were banned.
8.Midred needed emergency services because she over doses on pills so they put new blood in her system and pumped out the pills from her stomach.
9.A mechanical hound kills and hunts people that violated the law.
10.society see clarisse anti social because she asked quest to start a conversation and to other people her age she being anti social.
11.The woman lights the match because she would rather die then lose all her books and make her live life sad and can't think properly
12.Midred and montag relationship is sprayed they don't have any real conversation they sleep in different beds they both do what they want to do montag month has more of a connection then with clarisse
13.Beatty visit because montag hasn't been coming to work and there been a crisis with the books.
14.Kid go to school to learn and how society wants us to think and to know.
15.He feel like he gaining wait because of his knowledge of reading the books and it effecting himself

Book Notes

Montag comes home to his wife over dosesing and the mechanics came to help but it wasn't the emergency crew and they wanted $50 with saying if she will be okay.

F451 guiding questions

1. Fire fighters start the fire rather then stop the fires which is dystopia also books aren't for reading.

2.she asked a question that no one thinks about she say what she think for example she say aren't firefighter suppose to put out fire and why don't you read your book rather then burning them.

3.

FIRST IMPRESSION PRUFROCK

• My first impression is he should of went for it and not be the shy timid guy that he is if he would of added details on him asking her would of gave the poem more intrest it would give the title meaning but going from the tile you would think it was going to a cute love poem but instead it was showing the heartbreak of being to scared to ask her out but the poem it self was great and made it intresting by the title.

Poem notes on love song

Suspension of disbelief
Make us forget where we really are if it a good book or poem or movie

Imagery figurative language


Incidious-sneeky
Tedious-borning duel
Tone-threaten
Extended metaphor
Bald spot-getting old




Eliot Love song
First stanza -negative tone
"Do i dare diturb the universe " -shy timid didn't want to budge didnt want to do any thing wrong
Attitude- mind set dont want to take the risk
"These eyes"-feel like something wrong and nervous
"I should of been..."
"I have seen the greatest of my life flicker"-brieft
Eternal footman-death and time
He can't even talk to a girl he nothjng compared to hamlet
Nick is who he alway was all dune by who they were
You are who you are

Why the movie?

The movie to me would give me a better visual of the story and remind me of all the little  i might of not remember from the book. It also easier to follow through and listen the movie then read when sometime you forget everything you read.So the movie to me would be useful and help tand the story better

First impression love song poem

In the beginning it start off in italian which is known as a romance language which i like the idea i just  like to know what it means. I also like how the poem is very descriptive and uses metaphors and similes to have a better image in are minds.

Socratic notes

Why did daisy stay was it just for the money🤔
Why didnt she wait for gastby instead of going after tom and marrying him.
Daisy is the main cause of the story because she make gasby go after her
 Daisy wasnt the cause of the story it was gasby and and tom faul
Point of the whole book daisy and tom shouldnt of dated
Daisy didnt have much of a choice to leave tom
 They think money going to make them happy
Symbols...
Greenlight
Specticles
And asheap

Chapter 9 notes

 Nick wanted Gasby to be big but Daisy and tom left with no forwarding adress or didnt want to come like Meyer Wolfshiem and Klipspringer. Gasby dad didn't see his son for two years and Gasby bought the house for his dad.Gasby father was on happy man of his son and carried the photo of his house that gasby sent him. Only very few people showed up to Gasby funreal which were Nick, Owl Eyes, a few servants, and Gatsby’s father, Henry C. Gatz which was Gasby dad.Nick seen Tom Buchanan in the late afternoon in August walking on fifth avenue.Nick asked tom what did he tell william and he said william asked who had the car and if he didn't  say william was going to kill tom so tom tell willan Gasby has the car but didn't tell him daisy was driving.

Chapter 8 note

There a sense of urgency that the morning would be to late to tell Gasby. Gasby was a pennileess ypung man without a past.He was a caption in war befor he went to the front. Daisy wanted her life shaped now.Daisy didnt care on who she date she wanted someone with money and to tell her what to do. Gasby start to treat his servant nicer.This might be the last time gasby get to say good bye. George is hunted by his wife death. George wife was murdered and they believe it was gasby who killed her.At the end of the story there was sound of guns shots and there layed Gasby dead who was killed by willison and the willison killed himself.Denouement

Chapter 7

We learn Gasby lights one saturday night never was turned on and Gasby fired all his servents because he needed no one to gossip. Nick imagine tom was dead. When Gasby show up to daisy house daisy attitude toward tom changes to rude."her voice is full of money".Daisy gave tom  ordered and told him to take nick and joarden to the store and she will go with Gasby and Tom realize everything happening in front of his eyes.Tom realizes his wife falling in love with Gasby and his dream girl moving .Gasby tell tom your wife never loved you.

is gasby a good person?

He a good person because he generous he throw party for everyone to enjoy not just for him self guy and is after only one woman but he a bad person for trying to get her to leave her husband even though her husband is  rude he also spend so much money on others rather then himself

Great Gasby notes 5

When nick returns to west egg he thought his house was on fire but it was gasby houst lit but the was no oarty but gasby was walking over to nick and has nick invite daisy over for tea the next day but gasby want everything perfect he also offer a job to nick that would pay better but nick declined when daisy show up it was awkward for everyone. Gasby try to make nick happy he tries to invite him to colony island and then for a swim but nick say he to tired. Nick leaves for a half an hour to leave them alone and when he came back everything was less awkard.

Chapter 4 notes

In chapter 4 nick and Gasby went out to eat and Gasby tell nick that he doesnt want nick thinking the wrong idea about him and tell him about his life he said he a son of some wealthy people un the middle west he was educated in Oxford sence all his ancester went there he said his family all died and hiw war came and it was a relief he tried to die but never did he alway had a photograph  as a souvenir of a dozen men in a blazer. This is as far as i got i am on page 71 in the hard cover book

Chapter 3 remix

Nick meet Gasby at the party blindly not knowing it was him untill he introduced himself a little later but Nick realized him from war. Gasby didnt say much but nick was so amazed with him. Nick friend Jorden got asked to meet with Gasby but when she done talking to him she say what he said was really good but she cant say anything. After the party owl eye got into a car accident and had no idea what happend. After everyone left Gasby had his big house all to himself must be feeling lonely.We learn toward the end of the story that nick remeber how he meet Daisy he meet her at her first big golf tournament that she cheated in but we learn that she dishonest according to nick.


I am one of the few honest people that I have ever known-nick

Great Gatsby Note 3

In chapter 3 we learn that Gasby throw parties every week and invited Nick to the party. Nick shows up to the party a little after 7 and doesnt know anybody but he see his friend jorden and went with her where they were looking for the host but  came across the libary where he described this guy with owled eyes sitting under unread book telling tgem the books are real. Around mid night the 2 of them went out side to watch the entertainment where they sat by a handsome guy who nick said he realized and find out they served in the same divison durning war. And later was introduced as Jay Gasby. Gasby call everyone old sport and there something about him that nick really like about him.

Great Gatsby Note #2

Nick went with  Tom on the train  and Tom grabbed Nick and got off at a stop for Nick to meet his mystery woman who lived at a car dealer place with her husband willsion but when she leave with Tom her husband willsion think she going to go see her sister but she really going on dates with Tom with out her husband knows while they enter New York she seen dogs and bought one for $10 they go to her sister Catherine  apartment and when Tom get there he get whisky and start drinking

GREAT GATSBY REMIX 1

There a guy man Nick that just got out of war and doesn't want to be like his father so he move to the city with a room mate that bailed on him and he living in a crapy house in between mansion and we learn that everyone rude in the city and Nick end up going to dinner and learn Tom is a dick and is dating daisy but we learn that he might be cheating on her when Nick go home he meet his neighbor Gatsby  but we dont know anything about him and he just dissappears.And we also learn that Nick is someone that people open up to but he pushed everyone away but he really interested in Gastby.

Great Gatsby Notes 2

The butler wasnt always a butler he use to be the silver polisher for some people in New York

Tom has another woman then daisy according to Mrs baker

Nick is daisy cousin

Rotogravure- old

Tom doesn't think much about woman's

A single green light

Note to daisy daughter very important

great gatsby notes

"whenever you feel like criticizing anyone" "just rememberthat all people in this world haven't had the advantage that you've "

epigraph-is a qoute or a pharase at the beggeing of a book or a chapter that give us a clue about the story or chapter 

tom-rude/bully/rich 

everything is a remix notes

remix was first introduced with music

now everything can become a remix

everything is a remix 

Remix-the arrangement and tranformation of sample

or any kind of creation 

tranformation-taking different stuff and expanding it producing 

music as literature

Yes we can consider music as literature because the definition of literature means imaginative/ creative writing especially of recongnize artistic values and in music you have to be imaginative and creative because writing music is all thoughts.  So i belive music can be literature.The difference between a novel,a poem,a rap,a song, an opera and a symphony is some is true some is flase some rhyme a song a rap and opera all uses vocals and there the same by using creative thoughts