immigrants in are own land

theme-It never to late to change

tone - optimistic to serious

mood -deep,dark,depressing,sad 

devices-simile-we are given overall like mechanics wears

My mad dream of an essay

In the stories "sound of thunder" and "self reliance" are both about making choices. In life are future is determined on are choices earlier on in life. For the next paragraphs I'll be talking about how are choices we make in this moment influence are future.

In the story "self reliance" we learn about Emerson and what he believes and how we should be are self and not let other judge us. In some cases the choices we make by being are self may not be the best idea because it could be interpreted in the wrong way and think we could do what ever.However are choices in Emerson point in veiw I think would be to make smart choices and think of our future and be smart about it.For exsample Emerson in his reading talk about being yourself and not let other bug you but by being yourself it doesn't mean to just do what ever you want because later on in life the choices you made will be where you stand in the future like if you start to party and do drugs and think you don't need to go to school then you probably won't have the best job and will screw up your future.So are choices we make now do effect are future.

In the story "Sound of thunder" by Ray Bradbury Eckel pay $10,000 to travel with time safari inc that take you back in time to the dinosaurs age and is allowed to hunt them. In this story the choices you make may ruin your future.In the story you had to stay on the trail and follow strict instruction and Eckel didn't  follow them and step off trail which messes up the future. In this journey you were only aloud to shot animals with marks on them.The choice Eckel made almost ruin his future and even almost had him killed but he lucky his safari leaders didn't kill him. 

In both storie "on self reliance" and "Sound of thunder" your choices you choose will effect your future etheir in a good way or can ruin your future. These moment in "self reliance" influence are future by making us think over are choices but do it in a way to make us not ruin are future.In "Sound of Thunder" these moment influence us by making right decisions and follow rules.

In both storie "on self reliance" and "Sound of thunder" your choices you choose will effect your future etheir in a good way or can ruin your future. These moment in "self reliance" influence are future by making us think over are choices but do it in a way to make us not ruin are future.In "Sound of Thunder" these moment influence us by making right decisions and follow rules.

As you can see in my first paragraph I stated my thesis.In the following paragraph I disscussed what self reliance was about and how it influences are future by the choices we make. For the paragraph after that one I disscused what "sound of thunder" was about and how the choices we chooses effect are future. After that paragraph I compared both stories in the same paragraph. My last paragraph is closing paragraph.

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Response to A "Sound Of Thunder"

I read some of the story I didnt finsh it but what I understand from the story is Eckel went on a safrai but going back to the past to hunt aniamal in the past like dinosaurs . In order for him to do this hourney he had to pay $10,000 just to travel and hunt and if he doesnt follow any of the other rule he need to pay $10,000 again.

Emerson Child Essay

In the the essay on self reliance by Emerson you learn about him as a thinker and how he go about thing and how he see everything. In the following paragraphs I will explain his syntax his tone and diction as if i was saying it to a 10 year old.

In this first paragraph I am a explain his syntax. The way Emerson chooses and uses his word are pretty straight foward it not like young good man brown where you would need to look up alot of words even as an adult. Emerson uses alot of qoutes to get his message through. For exsample one of my favorite qoute are "Do not think the youth has no force, because he cannot speak to you and me. Hark! in the next room his voice is sufficiently clear and emphatic."This is one one of my favorite qoutes because it saying us as younger kids had forces because we would scream out what we want and wouldn't let us be affected by other people but as we grow older we be more careful with what we do because of how other people would look at us.His syntax is similar to his diction.

In this paragraph I will explain Emerson diction or his choice of word in a particular situation. Emerson choice of word in his essay is pretty obvious for exsample his whole main point of the story is how we let others get into are minds to judge us. We as people care what others think about us and that his point we shouldn't care what other think about us but it unfortunate that we do anyways. For exsample Emerson said "Speak what you think now in hard words, and to-morrow speak what to-morrow thinks in hard words again." Which means speak what you want and don't let any one get in the way of it or let them judge you.

In this story Emerson tone is more of a disappointment of how the world became as we grew older. Emerson just want peace and for everyone to be diffrernt and not to be judge.For exsample he said
"I wish it to be sound and sweet, and not to need diet and bleeding. I ask primary evidence that you are a man, and refuse this appeal from the man to his actions. " This mean he want everything to be quiet and non judgementap and for us to die and say what we want with out let anyone bring you ng you down or feel uncomfortable. Emerson tone is just depression and disappointment of what world had to become.

As you can see in the last paragraphs I disscused the syntax,diction, main idea, and tone in a way for a 10 year old to understand. As a 10 year old he/she should know his main idea was to not let no one judge you an to be yourself like you did when you were younger.

Emerson presentation notes

trust thy self you should trust your instinct some time it the best for yourself

the only way to have a froend is to be one

being honest is what get you to have friends

nothing van bring you peace but your self

try your hardest in lifep
do not give up in life

get your beliefs by yourself believe what you believe

to be great is to be misunderstood

a man is his own start
make ur own destiny

nothing can bring you peace but urself

We cant sit around and wait for happiness

you are you key to your own happiness

society will alway be changing

emerson was born may 25,1803
he died april 27,1882


look within yourself

therw is something which you can do better then others

being an individual without relying on others ideas is hard to acheive

emerson urge his reader to follow their individual will instead of conforming to social expectation


except are self so we can grow sucess is in are mind

we all have different point of veiw

dont let anyone bring you down

Emerson said it

"Man is his own star"

"But if I'am the devil child, I will live then from the devil"

"To be great is to be misunderstood"

"Speak your latent conviction,and it shall be the the universial sense; for the inmost in due time because the outmost"

Speak your mind no matter what other thinks just like this class

"Not for nothing one face, one character, one fact, make much impression on him and another one "

"The secrete of fortune is joy in our hands"

If you actually do the work no one can take the sucess from you

"We but half express ourselves, and are ashamed of that devine idea which each of us represent"

Were scared to speak up because of what other think

"Nothing can bring you peace but yourself"

"The god love him because men hated him"